Some people say that grandparents should take an active part in their grandchildren’s upbringing

At all times there was controversy over child-rearing. Some people consider that

grandparents should be involved in the lives of their grandchildren whereas other believe that parents must bring up children themselves.

To my mind, this method of education has a positive impact on both the older generation and the younger. Firstly, grandchildren learn to care for adults and help them. Hence, formed the positive qualities that are needed by each person. Secondly, grandparents pass on the experience of past generations and their own, talk about traditions and culture, and tell the story of their family.

But some think that taking care of young generation does more harm than good.

For example, grandparents need to pay more attention to themselves because they have a lot of health problems at his age. In addition, older people often argue with grandchildren due to modern innovations that they do not recognize or understand.

But I think the latter are wrong. In modern world, doctors can quickly assist grandparents thanks to advanced medicine. Older people tend to learn the new century and it is technology.

In conclusion, I want to say that grandparents need to spend more time with their grandchildren and send them your experience because it is very important for children.

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1. Введение. 2 точки зрения.

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Два аргумента в подтверждение вашей точки зрения.

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4. Опровержение на противоположное к вашему мнению точку зрения с двумя аргументами.

5. Заключение.

Фразы клише в эссе:

1. Some people consider/think/ believe

2. Whereas other believe/ think/ consider

3. To my mind

4. Firstly/Secondly

5. But some think/believe/consider that

6.For example

7.In addition

8.But I think the latter are wrong.

9.In conclusion

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2. Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
3. Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
4. Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
5. Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.