Online shopping is better than in-store shopping

Some people are convinced that buying things online is much better than spending your precious time on shopping in the huge department stores. Now I would like to express my point of view on the problem of online shopping and in-store shopping.

Personally, I strongly believe that online shopping is a great idea. Firstly, it helps people, who are always busy not to waste time. When you shop online you can do it in any time and place. It is very convenient. You should not spend your time on driving to the shop. Secondly, you have much time for choosing things in calm atmosphere, sitting in your comfortable armchair. Nowadays we have a great choice in the Internet shops.

However, there are some people who speak against. They claim that shopping at stores brings you joy and happiness.

You can touch and feel a thing before buying it. Moreover, department stores have a huge amount of entertainment. You can buy something and have fun.

I completely disagree with this point of view, as online shopping saves your time for more important things in your life. You can spend a wonderful time with your family and visit theaters, museums or do different activities than to be in the crowded stores. In addition, nowadays you do not have to buy something online if you do not like it. You always can refuse from your order.

To sum everything up, I can say that online shopping has more advantages than in-store shopping. I am sure that online shopping is necessary for busy people.

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1. Some people think that in the future traditional shops will disappear and all shopping will be online with home delivery.
2. Some people think that in the future traditional shops will disappear and all shopping will be on line with home delivery
3. Online shops will never substitute conventional ones
4. It would be better for students to be taught at home online instead of going to school.